The Heart of Betrayal

*** (3 out of 5)

The Heart of Betrayal by Mary E. Pearson

The Remnant Chronicles Book 2

Betrayal

This is the sequel to The Kiss of Deception.

Urg I wanted to love this book, I really did, but it just didn’t do it for me.  It felt drawn out and got a bit tiring.  I got completely sucked in the first book, but it took me a while to get into this one.  It had sooo much potential yet it was just sort of flat.

I still love Lia.  She is amazingly strong despite all the bad things happening to her.  She does what she needs to survive.  She is resourceful and clever and everything a strong female character should be.  However, I am a little tired of the love triangle (or is it a love square? its kind of blurry where that one is headed)  I realize she needs to play certain games to survive, but does she really have to fall in love with them all?  Just because someone has a troubled past doesn’t excuse their current actions, even if their intent is sincere.

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I could have done with less interactions between Lia and the Komizar.  Or at least it would have been nice if the interactions had more variety.  They were very redundant.

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And what was his deal with obsessing over her hair and clothes?!? Oooooh maybe he is gay and in love with Kaden.  Haha that would be a cool twist.

I would have liked to know more about Rafe and his time as “emissary.”  For the most part you only see him when he is with Lia and that is not very often.  It would have been nice to learn more about who he is and what he thinks.  We did get a lot of insight into Kaden.

I also would have liked to know more about Pauline and her story.  There are only a handful of chapters where you see what she is doing.  I know that her actions will most likely come into play more in the next book, but it would have alleviated some of the monotony of Lia’s story, to see more of Pauline’s.

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This book is better than the first in the aspect that it actually has a conclusion of sorts.  It is still a huge cliffhanger but something big actually happens at the end of the book.  It was a slight improvement, but not enough to overcome all of its other shortcomings.

I am still very much invested in the story and am excited to start the third and final book.  Hopefully it isn’t slow (because there is a LOT that needs to happen).

Midnight in Austenland

*** (3 of 5)

Midnight in Austenland by Shannon Hale

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Midnight in Austenland is the sequel to Austenland.  I really really liked Austenland, buuuut unfortunately Midnight in Austenland didn’t live up to its namesake (Lets see how many times I can say “Austenland” before it gets old).

I was so excited to read this book.  Maybe that was part of the problem.  My expectations were too high going in?  Maybe if I hadn’t have been so excited I would have liked it better? Probably not.

The plot of Midnight in Austenland was a mix between suspense and romance.  It was a far stretch from the original Austenland, which was straight up romance. (Not steamy romance, but like a love story romance)

Time for a tangent …. I am a huge chicken when it comes to scary or suspenseful books.  And I refuse to watch scary movies.  Even scary commercials are too much for me.  One time at the movie theater they showed a commercial for one of those creepy doll movies (Annabelle maybe?) and my heart rate literally spiked.  I had a fitbit that kept track of my heart rate.  It thought I was exercising.  Thats how bad it was. And it was only a commercial.  My body physically reacts to being scared and I don’t like it. (Maybe everyone’s does? I don’t know, but personally its too much for me) I couldn’t imagine what my heart would do if I had to sit through a full movie.  Last time I went through a haunted house I had a panic attack and my mom had to take me out the way we came. (I was 12 ish) Another time on a school overnight retreat the upperclassmen made a “haunted house” and all the underclassmen “got” to go through it.  Everyone else had a ton of fun,  it definitely was meant to be fun, not mean, but I hated it.  Just thinking back I can feel my heart start to race. So, yea, I don’t do scary

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Back to the review … While Austenland was loosely based on Pride and Prejudice, Midnight in Austenland tends toward Northanger Abbey.  The heroine has a very active imagination and she is thrust into a world that is not as it seems.  Her stay at Austenland is themed by a mystery. (think murder-mystery dinner but 2 weeks long and you are solving a really old mystery)  As she is searching for clues she finds more than whats intended and she can’t tell the game from real life.

At one point they play a game in the dark where one person is the “murderer” and everyone tries to find them.  The heroine is obviously flustered and unsure but everyone else presses her to play anyway.  This hit a little to close to home.  When I read I often get lost in the story and connect with the heroine, so them forcing her to play made me uncomfortable and brought back memories of makeshift haunted houses.  I did not like it at all.

So my biggest issue with the book was the plot.  I am sure there are tons of people who love the suspenseful plotline, but it ruined the story for me.

You may be asking “If she hated it so much why did she give it 3 stars?”

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Well I am glad you asked!

I didn’t actually hate it.  It just wasn’t my cup of tea.  I can tell that it is a good book, and that most people who enjoyed the first book would probably like it.  And there were parts I liked.  I liked the heroine, Charlotte.  I liked how she was introduced.  How she was described in the beginning.  It made her especially relatable.   I also liked how the story jumped back and fourth between present and past.  It made her so much more real, seeing how she handled different situations.  And it brought you there gradually.  Showing you what you needed to fully understand why she reacted the way she did.

So overall the book was just okay, if you like suspense and romance I would recommend it.  If you are like me and don’t like suspense then I would probably skip this one.